Here's what I took away from the AutomobileMag.com article...
Status Update: 2013 Tesla Model S
Wrong model year.
Takeaway: Editorial is not as nitpicking about fact-checking as some of us.
heavily subsidized Tesla Motors
What's a Subsidized Loan?
"Subsidized loans are loans for which the borrower does not pay interest."
Tesla gets loan approval from US Department of Energy | Press Releases | Tesla Motors
"Tesla Motors has received approval for about $465 million in low-interest loans from the US Department of Energy"
The article is using "subsidized" either incorrectly or in a way that probably deserves at least a footnote.
Takeaway: Article is editorially soft on either journalistic ethics or quality, or both.
began delivering in small quantities on June 22
Technically incorrect as Founders vehicles 1 and 2 were delivered prior to that.
Technically incorrect even if you exclude all founders vehicles, since they didn't deliver any non-Founder vehicles on June 22.
Takeaway: Editorial is not as nitpicking about fact-checking as some of us.
it's not over styling but the the half-billion dollars in federal loans, state tax breaks, and bargain-priced factory space that Tesla has obtained.
Typo "the the" should have been caught by editorial review.
Sentence structure makes it sound like Tesla obtained "state tax breaks". This is news to me, and a footnote would be great so that I could learn more.
Takeaway: Opportunity to provide information lost (Tesla-specific "state tax breaks") or incorrect implication. Both are editorial "opportunities for improvement."
Takeaway: I didn't read this paragraph as negative towards Tesla. Actually, I read it as a positive -- that Staubel is aware of the political and economic climate. It's placement is a bit odd for my tastes but not "wrong."
Takeaway: The love of metaphors that only have 1 dimension of relation with the original topic made this paragraph completely useless to me as a reader.
Starry-eyed at the prospect of being the first Model S owners in their chapters of the Sierra Club, they had put down deposits of $40,000 and waited for their Signature models, priced at $97,900.
I'm fairly confident they have different price tags, given that at least one of them doesn't have a panoramic roof. Further, the "detail" of the tax credit was completely omitted.
Takeaway: Lazy journalism, but not really skewed for/against Tesla.
noting the low seating position
Here, I actually want an opinion. Was it good low or bad low? A review should at least offer an opinion of the first thing they considered worthy of observing when sitting in the car.
Takeaway: Are they reviewing the car or just jotting down the specifications?
sports-bar-sized central touchscreen
No human-fitting sports bar is 17" in any dimension. No self-respecting sports bar would have 17" screens for anything but register-type activities.
Takeaway: Nothing useful as a reader.
Takeaway: Editorial nit -- semicolon misuse.
Frankly, we didn't notice anything exceptional about the cornering in comparison to, say, an Audi A7 or Fisker Karma;
Takeaway: <What other TMC posters have said eloquently.>
After our sampling, we see the opposite happening.
Takeaway: Assertion with no backing information. Useless. At minimum this needs a footnote to elaborate.
And what happens to Tesla when the first 10,000 acolytes receive their servings?
Takeaway: I'm not sure the author or editor know what acolyte means.
Overall takeaway: Lazy blog format with low signal, high noise. Less than a dime a dozen.
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