I read through your contract and one concern that I have is that it appears to be more of a rental agreement than a lease agreement since the car is never registered in the lessee's name. It is more like renting a car from Hertz but with a longer term and some purchase rights. Tesla never sees you as an owner as it would with a standard lease. It creates numerous complications with registration of the vehicle in other states as only the title holder or registered owner can register a vehicle in many states. Your contract states that Kilocar is the registered owner and title holder. Additionally, you have a lot of restrictions that go way beyond a standard lease. For example, while I don't own any pets, my grown up children do. I could envision a situation where I am babysitting my grand kids and something happens to their pet while in my care and I need to rush it to a vet. If I put the pet in my Kilocar vehicle I am in violation of the agreement (breach of contract) and subject to its penalties. My legal rights as a renter are substantially different and reduced compared to those of a lessee and registered owner. The law in this area varies in different states, but it is akin to the way short term home renters, i.e. vacation rentals, have no legal ownership rights but a long term lessee does. A few other observations:
In paragraph the preamble and in paragraph 1 you call this a rental and make it synonymous to a subscription and limit usage to personal, family, commuting, and household use. Yet in paragraph 17 you state that the renter is agreeing to not allow any other person to drive the vehicle.
In paragraph 10 you use the term Lease to describe this agreement (legally they mean different things).
In paragraph 18 you require the renter to obtain insurance on the vehicle, which would probably have to be different than a leased vehicle because it would be more like insurance on a rental vehicle. As the renter you are not the registered owner or title holder which could create problems in obtaining this insurance.
Paragraph 22 seems to contradict paragraph 17 on who can drive the vehicle. Paragraph 22© could be an impossible action and burden placed on the subscriber.
Paragraph 23 is both confusing and contradictory for anyone registering in their home state. Normally, a rental company handles all registration in whatever state it operates and deals with the issue of out of state vehicles rented in a different state. The renter has no ability to do this.
Unlike a normal rental, in the event of the death of the renter their is nothing binding on heirs where there is in this contract.
Will Tesla allow a renter access via smartphone, etc. as the renter is not the registered owner.
I would like to hear your views on this.